Hello, Cornelia. I think that your blog was great, except maybe re - read more than once, because I could see some punctuation that was missing. Also, when you enter your post, it starts on slide 7. I don't know if you can fix that, but maybe try to. Anyway, it was great!
Hi Cornelia, I really liked your kayaking slide! It actually reminds me when we played 'pirates' on the kayaks, and pushed the boys off their kayaks,as we jumped in the water splashing them! HAHA! Anyway..., I liked how you added a quick bunch of information that has a lot of detail like: 'The water was so clear, and the bush was so fascinating! It was all native to NZ.' Hey, what was it like to experience being out here in full nature? Bye, Your bestie, Josie!
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Hello, Cornelia. I think that your blog was great, except maybe re - read more than once, because I could see some punctuation that was missing. Also, when you enter your post, it starts on slide 7. I don't know if you can fix that, but maybe try to.
ReplyDeleteAnyway, it was great!
Thank you kale'a,
ReplyDeleteI will try my best to fix up my punctuation and re-read 2 times thak you for the positive feedback!
Cornelia
Thank-
ReplyDeleteHi Cornelia, I really liked your kayaking slide! It actually reminds me when we played 'pirates' on the kayaks, and pushed the boys off their kayaks,as we jumped in the water splashing them! HAHA! Anyway..., I liked how you added a quick bunch of information that has a lot of detail like: 'The water was so clear, and the bush was so fascinating! It was all native to NZ.' Hey, what was it like to experience being out here in full nature?
ReplyDeleteBye, Your bestie, Josie!
Thanks!
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